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Post by crypticshadows on Apr 16, 2011 19:11:39 GMT -5
Name: Icestar
Age: 4 years
Gender: she-cat
Clan: New Thunderclan
Rank: Leader
Appearance:
Silver and Grey tabby slim she cat with white paws and a white underbelly. Icy-blue eyes
Personality:
Loyal fierce wise and shy. Knows when to solve things with violence and when to solve things with words. Can keep her cool in any situation. Likes to watch other cats interact with each other but prefers to keep to herself.
History:
Abandoned as a young kit she was found by a patrol hiding in a clump of grass on top of a huge rock. The little kit was badly scratched and could not walk. Her mother was nowhere to be found. They brought her to the clan. It is still unknown how the kit got to the top of the rock and who or what had given her the scratches
RP Sample:
She looked out from her den. The entire clan looked weak. Those Two-legs have taken her strongest warriors away to do Starclan knows what to them. "Oh Starclan" she thought. "why have you allowed this to happen to us"
Other:
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Post by Neruka. on Apr 16, 2011 19:50:46 GMT -5
Thats a great start Crypticshadows!
We just need to add a few more sentences here and there.
You need to add 2 more sentences to appearance.  Maybe talk about height? Any markings or scars Icestar may have?
and, you need to add 3 more sentences to history. Maybe talk about her becoming leader?
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Maybe talk about height? Any markings or scars Icestar may have?